I just wrote my story on macedonian and now I have to translate it on english..but I'm not yet ready because I have to write some other detals..I Like it because it's like short movie and it's really intersting.I think that I made great mix of the hot and the romantic...Exept Sara who is also ready from here???
-- Edited by Borce on Friday 19th of June 2009 12:06:53 PM
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"And I wish I was a camera sometimes
So, I could take your picture with my mind
Put it in a frame for you to see
How beautiful you really are to me..."
I just came back from profesional translator who translate for me my scenario!!!I love my scenario on perfect english.....Later today I will post it....I'm soooooo exaitedddd!!!!AAAA!!!!
-- Edited by Borce on Saturday 20th of June 2009 05:59:11 PM
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Yeah sure...I can't wait to show you the scenario...but I will post it tomorrow when the competition will end...because I think that like that is better
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I think you`re right Borce..it may be possible that your scenario become a source of inspiration for the others...and the other stories won`t be so original:) Anyway i can`t wait to read it:)
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"And I wish I was a camera sometimes
So, I could take your picture with my mind
Put it in a frame for you to see
How beautiful you really are to me..."
I think you`re right Borce..it may be possible that your scenario become a source of inspiration for the others...and the other stories won`t be so original:) Anyway i can`t wait to read it:)
Yeah you are totaly in right because of those reasons I don't want to send it todayBtw Georgiana can you also show us your scenario tomorrow???I can't wait to read the ideas of the others here...Also Kira,Sara...I would also like to see your ideas...Snezana said that will write something also....and of course If someone also wrote and sent his scenario can tomorrow share with us...because the competition is over tomorrow...
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Yes of course, I didn't think about that. You can share ideas after.
Of course that I didin't talk about you guys here who know me but for someone that don't know me and is not my friend and that person will not care to copy my scenario so because of that the best will be tomorrow to send the scenario...I can't wait to show you guys...
-- Edited by Borce on Sunday 21st of June 2009 03:08:31 PM
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I sent mine like 5 minutes ago xD I think it's average scenario, cause mine is like a love story..I can post it now if you want to read it since the contest is ending today anyway ;)
-- Edited by silhouetteofthenight on Sunday 21st of June 2009 03:28:31 PM
I sent mine like 5 minutes ago xD I think it's average scenario, cause mine is like a love story..I can post it now if you want to read it since the contest is ending today anyway ;)
-- Edited by silhouetteofthenight on Sunday 21st of June 2009 03:28:31 PM
OMG i want to see it Snezana....I'm so exaited about the other ideas....because it's always intersting to see how the other fans think and understand the song.....I really hope and wish some from here to be the winner and we all to celabrate for that!!!!
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A girl is sitting on a bench and she flashbacks memory of her last fight with her boyfriend. The flashback shows her and her boyfriend fighting and the guy grabs her by her wrist and screams something into her face. She starts crying and the the guy leaves.
Act 2:
Next day the girls is waken up by her phone ringing. She fell asleep with cell phone in her hand last night, so she drops it on the floor and by the time she's fully waken up she's already checking her text messages. The camera zooms in onto her cell phone screen where it reads 'I'm sorry this didn't work out, I'm breaking up with you.' The camera focuses back to the girls eyes where tears are falling from her eye like it'd be raining, then the girls collapses on the floor in all the pain and the camera shows her wrist which has a bruise from last night on it.
Act 3: The phone rings, the girls is still lying on the floor, but she finally manages to get to the hallway where the phone is. She answers the phone, she says something into the speaker and the the camera shows the other girl on the phone waving her two tickets in her hand. The camera zooms to the ticket which reads: KOLDUN - concert tonight with full band and live sound. 8pm. and bellow on the ticket there's a smaller text that reads: Bring all your boyfriends/girlfriends/brothers/mothers/fathers/sisters... with you, because you don't wanna miss this out!The camera goes back to the main girl and we see her still teary, but she nods into the phone and whispers 'Okay'.
Act 4: The concert is about to start, everyone is cheering, lights are up, curtain is down. After a few seconds the curtain goes up and KOLDUN comes on scene, he sings his first song in rocky version - Ya Ne Umru Bez Tvoey Lyubvi. The main girl dances to the song, seems she likes it. The concert continues, but we don't see it anymore.
Act 5: The camera shows the main girl and Dima running over the beach catching each other, swimming together hand-by-hand and then later stargazing. The girl catches some of the walking by people staring into them, but she looks to Dima's eyes and as we see, she doesn't care about all the looks. She puts her head onto his chest and they fall asleep embraced.
Act 6: This act shows Dima and the girls holding hands while running into the line for a happy-go-round ride. There's a long line ahead of them, so meanwhile they're waiting we see the girl telling Dima her story pointing to her bruised wrist. He's listening to her calmly and smiling here and there, then he hugs her tightly and pets her head. The camera zooms in to the girls lips, smiling. The scene ends with them on the ride.
Act 7-final: The image in girls head deisappears and we are back to reality - on the concert, it hasn't ended yet, there's a last song Dima is performing - Nastroisya Na Menya He goes stage diving and ends up above the girl, he jumps in front of her and sings the refrain into her face while singing she takes her hand and takes her all the way to the stage and has her dance with him while at the end of the song he hugs her and bows to the crowd. The crowd is going crazy. He still holds the girls' hand and walks with her behind the curtain where the scene ends with the two kissing and after awhile Dima brushing girls' wrist looking into her eyes and hugging her.
The concept of the video is: the girl is cheated by her boyfriend, they fight, he dumps her, because he knows he screwed up, the girls still loves him no matter what and is broken when he texts her he's breaking up with her. At the end of it all she unexpectedly finds her true love at the concert, though at first it's only her imagination at the end of the concert it turns out there's happaned love at the first sight which we clearly see and which happens to be both sided, but Dima takes the first step making it all 'concert planned' when he takes the girl with him on stage and by the time she realizes she's not dreaming anymore she sees that with him she really will be happy and he'll always give her his shoulder to hold onto.
WOW Snezana I really enjoyed.....I love the part in the beach and the end....I love the fact that you used the lyrics of the song like inspiration because there is also beach and water.....Also I love that you wrote Act 1......because I wrote my scenario action by action but in text....Very profesional and creative.....The best mark and more from me!!!
-- Edited by Borce on Sunday 21st of June 2009 05:15:29 PM
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Thank you very much Nadia and Borce. Borce I already read yours, but can't wait to read it in whole proper english and with all the details :D
Nadia, did you write it too? And no, unfortunately I didn't send it in russian. I didn't wanted to risk google translator mess up the whole meaning, so I rather left it in english..I really hope that english scenarios won't be eliminated right away just because they're in english though =/
well, like I said it's like a simple love story, this my scenario, so I don't keep high hopes for having it choosen, cause there can be even better ones,but at least I tried right ;)
-- Edited by silhouetteofthenight on Sunday 21st of June 2009 05:55:19 PM